You can improve your date, relationships and even land a better job by improving your profile’s copywriting.
In this case, my friend David’s got 300% more dates after some twist with his profile.
What? It isn’t magic, but you can improve your life by communicating better your intentions and propose yourself in a different light.
David is a cool guy, but he still wasn’t attracting the right pool of girls on dating sites like InternationalCupid.com and Match.com.
I got curious and had a look at his profile, understood the problem and hijacked his dating profile for 24 hours.
A Better Dating Profile Can Change Your Life
Within few hours David’s new profile went up – BOOM – 280% more women engaging with him.
Let me tell you, David loved the surprise.
Here, How I did it.
Old Dating Profile
The problems with David’s old dating profile:
~ Talking so great about himself just sound creepy.
~ Party, date and fun together it’s the perfect match when looking for a hooker, it isn’t the case for David because I asked him.
~ The last phrase is just so common and boringgggggg.
New Dating Profile; What I Changed
I didn’t do anything crafty like a lie, deceiving, or manipulate the picture with Photoshop.
Instead, I polish his profile with better copy-writing.
~ Gave some space between the text, look more pleasant to read.
~ I stated exactly what he was looking for at the beginning.
~ Make his offer stand out from the crowed with a direct message to the readers; join me for a great time.
~ I wrote the profile like a human being, not a robot.
~ David has a cool job, so I ensure to pass the message on.
~ Final touch, I made it clear what he’s looking for with call to action “send me a message”.
David’s Dating Profile Result
David is a great guy in real life but online he didn’t have much of a success.
With some good writing, he got 3 times more dates. Lucky Guy.
So, show your good qualities by writing a more engaging profile. There isn’t any point to writing how much you are clever and smart if your communication shows otherwise.
I love to help others with their personal and sexual life, you deserve it.